For 3 months, Travis Kelsey had been preparing the ideal proposal. With Donna’s assistance, he had selected the ring, investigated the site with Jason, worked with Taylor security team, and even hired a photographer to document the occasion. Everything was meticulously arranged. Travis was going to propose to Taylor Swift on Saturday night at dusk in the botanical gardens, where they’d had their first meaningful chat away from cameras and people.
Patrick and Britney, his immediate family, were the only ones who were aware. Taylor’s security detail in Mahomes. Everyone had taken a vow of confidentiality because he was aware of how infrequently Taylor received real surprises in her wellplanned life. Travis had taken great effort to ensure the surprise was flawless.
Travis was unaware that Brittney Mahomes was going to unintentionally ruin three months of meticulous planning with a single text message at that very moment, 3 days prior to the proposal. Sitting in her kitchen, Britney was working with Kylie Kelsey to finalize the logistics of a surprise engagement. Following the proposal, they were hosting a party.
Between two group conversations, she was exchanging texts. In one, Donna, Kylie, and Patrick planned a covert proposal. In another, Taylor, Kylie, and a few other intelligent team members and their girlfriends participated in a girl’s night. Without checking which conversation she had chosen, she hurriedly typed.
Does Taylor know Travis is proposing Saturday? Want to make sure she doesn’t make other plans. She then clicked submit. Her phone began urgently buzzing 5 seconds later. Patrick’s name appeared. The display, please confirm that you did not send that to the incorrect group. When she responded, Patrick spoke in a terrified tone. Brittany felt her stomach drop.
She felt the blood leave her face as she glanced at her phone. Girls night had received the message. That conversation included Taylor. Britney muttered, “Oh my god, Patrick. Oh my god.” I sent it to the incorrect group. Taylor noticed it. She’s in that conversation. Remove it now. Remove it. Britney attempted to erase the message with trembling hands, but when opening the conversation, she discovered that Taylor had been on the internet before.
Beneath that, the message appeared as Reed. Taylor had typed something which was worse. What? Taylor was typing something else as indicated by the appearance of three dots. Britney was horrified to see the dots vanish, then resurface, then vanish once more. It was obvious that Taylor was trying to decide how to react. At last, a message showed up.
Incorrect conversation. Britney’s fingers darted over the keyboard. Yes, I’m very sorry. Disregard that. They were discussing very unrelated topics, but they both realized it was too late. There was no rational explanation for that message, save the obvious one. Patrick gave Travis a call right away. We have a problem, dude.
20 minutes later, Travis was listening to Patrick describe what had transpired while sitting in his car outside the chief’s office with his head in his hands. When Patrick was done, Travis replied bluntly, “So Taylor knows.” What she knows is unknown to us. Patrick made an effort. Perhaps she considers it a joke.
Perhaps she didn’t read it all the way through. She read it. Patrick Taylor Swift is who she is. She looks for hidden meanings in the songs. You believe she’s will you miss Travis’s proposal on Saturday? Travis could feel his well-thoughtout strategy falling apart. He had desired this to be flawless.
He had desired for Taylor to have one sincere moment of astonishment. One unexpected and unplanned aspect of her life was now ruined. His mother texted him and his phone buzzed. Brittany told me what transpired. Honey, I’m so sorry. What will you do? Travis gazed at the message. How was he going to respond? Act as if it never occurred, recognize it, modify all of his plans before he could make a choice.
Another a SMS message arrived. Taylor’s one. Can we have a conversation? Travis’s heart fell. He gave her a call right away. When Taylor responded, she said, “Hey.” in a carefully bland tone. “Hello, I assume you received Britney’s mail.” “Yes, there was a pause. It’s Saturday, then.” Travis shut his eyes.
I’m sorry, Taylor. You weren’t intended to learn that way. I’ve spent months preparing for this. Stop, Travis. Taylor softly cut him off. You don’t have to express regret, Britney aired. It does occur. However, the surprise is now spoiled. All right, Taylor stated slowly. Not always. By what do you mean? I could act as though I didn’t see the message.
You could carry out your idea. I could pretend to be shocked. Something twisted in Travis’s chest uncomfortably. Do you want to pretend to be shocked? Taylor answered. I want you to have the proposal you planned. You’ve obviously given this a lot of thought. That wouldn’t be real, but I don’t want Britney’s accident tomorrow to mar it for you. Your reaction wouldn’t begenuine.
Does that really matter? Taylor questioned Travis. I’m still going to respond. Yes, I will still be content. I simply won’t be shocked. Travis pondered that for a while. A part of him wanted to accept her offer in order to save his ideal plan, but another part of him, the part that had fallen in love with Taylor due to her genuiness and honesty, couldn’t get rid of the notion that it was improper to begin their engagement with a performance.
Finally, he responded, “I don’t know. Give it some thought. Can I give you a call back later?” Naturally, Taylor murmured, “I’m happy no matter what you decide, Travis. I adore you. I adore you, too. Travis hung up and sat in his car, staring at nothing for a while. His phone was ringing with texts from Patrick, Jason, and his mother.
Everyone was curious about his plans. However, Travis was still unable to respond to them. He had to think about this for himself first. He considered every proposal he had ever seen. The extravagant public ones at restaurants and stadiums, the private personal ones, and the unexpected flash ma proposals that went viral.
One thing united them all. The individual being suggested didn’t knew it was going to happen. That startle, that surprise, that unplanned happiness. The moment was magical because of that. Isn’t that right? Then he considered Taylor’s life, though. Every public appearance was prepared. Every interview response was thought out.
And every photo opportunity was orchestrated. Sincere astonishment was uncommon in the world she lived in. Where she had to continuously be ready for cameras, for criticism, and for the unexpected to become public right away. Perhaps Travis didn’t think she was surprised by the actual gift. Perhaps it was allowing her to simply be there in the present without feeling compelled to execute the ideal response.
That night, Travis summoned Jason, Donna, Patrick, and Britney to his house for an urgent meeting. Taylor did not receive an invitation. This was about determining how to proceed. Even before they began, Britney was crying. Travis, I really apologize. I simply didn’t check. Even though I’ve been texting in between chats all day. Brittney, it’s all right.
With a horse voice, Travis spoke. Accidents do occur. All we have to do now is find out what to do. Taylor promised to take action. Travis informed the group. She expressed her desire for me to go with the first plan. In fact, that’s very charming. According to Kylie, she’s attempting to shield your emotions. However, it’s not real.
According to Travis, being sincere was the main goal. Jason, who had remained silent up until now, said something. Do you know what I think, man? I think you’re overanalyzing this. Oh, no. because it’s not the surprise that matters. The goal of the idea is not to startle Taylor. Asking her to live her life with you is what it’s all about.
It doesn’t matter if she is aware of it or not, what she’s responding to or what you’re asking. Donna gave a nod. Jason is correct. And consider it from Taylor’s point of view. Honey, she had to control her expressions for cameras and audiences throughout her entire life. Do you not believe that knowing what’s coming would really make her feel relieved to be able to simply concentrate on the now without worrying about having the ideal spontaneous response? That was not how Travis had considered it. It’s kind of funny story.
Years from now, you’ll tell your kids about it, Patrick continued. How Aunt Brittney nearly ruined the proposal, Travis said, glancing at Britney, who forced a feeble smile through her tears. Travis remarked, “But I want to do something different.” as an idea began to take shape. Saturday won’t be the surprise anymore if Taylor already knows about it.
So, I’m going to change the wind, but keep the where and how. Donna asked, “What do you mean? I’m going to propose tomorrow, Thursday night, instead of Saturday evening. The location and setup will be the same, but 2 days early. That way, there’s still some element of Jason smiled. I like it. Keep her on her toes. But what if she’s not ready? Kylie asked.
What if she wants those extra days to mentally prepare? That proves my point, Travis said. A proposal shouldn’t require mental preparation. It should just be a moment between two people who love each other. I agree. Donna said squeezing his hand. And Travis, honey, remember something. Taylor said yes to spending her life with you long before you bought that ring.
The proposal is just making it official whether it takes place on Thursday or her response is the same on Saturday or next month. Travis felt a little less tension. His mother was correct. He had been so preoccupied with crafting the ideal moment that he had forgotten it was merely a formality. Taylor had already chosen him just as he had chosen her.
Hey, take a moment to think about what you would do in this situation. Would you stick to the original plan and let your partner actsurprised or would you change it up? Please leave a comment below because this decision is more important than you might think. Travis texted Taylor the following day saying dinner tonight. You adore that Italian restaurant. Sure.
What time? 7 or something nice. When Travis picked Taylor up that night, she was dressed elegantly but casually. Nice jeans and a sweater, clearly for a restaurant rather than a botanical garden proposal. “You look great,” Travis said, kissing her cheek. “Thanks. You look nice, too. Special occasion. Just felt like taking my girl out.
” They drove to the restaurant, had a lovely dinner, talking and laughing as usual. Taylor appeared at ease and had no idea that Travis had a ringed box in his jacket pocket. Following dinner, Travis suggested. Want to go for a walk? It’s a nice night. Sure, Taylor said, though she looked slightly puzzled. It was November and definitely not that warm.
Travis drove them to the botanical gardens. They were officially closed for the evening, but Travis had arranged special access with the management. As they walked through the gates, Taylor looked around, clearly confused. Travis, what? What are we doing here? It’s closed. He took her hand and said, “I got permission.
I had something I wanted to show you.” He guided her along the dimly lighted passageways that were only illuminated by tiny solar lights until they arrived at the location of their first meaningful chat, which had taken place months prior. There used to be a tiny clearing with a seat overlooking a pond, but it had been completely changed.
A gentle glow was produced by string lights suspended in the trees. The route was lined with glass holders and candles. The ground is strewn with rose petals. Taylor halted her stroll, her hand, opening her mouth. What is this, Travis? Travis turned to her and said this. Do you think I’m not meeting your expectations? Taylor’s eyes grew wide with realization. Hold on.
Saturday, I thought. I believed you to be. Travis pulled out the ring box and stated. Change of plans. However, I’m not. I didn’t dress that way. Taylor started crying as she glanced down at her sweater and jeans, then back at Travis. Actual tears, not tears from a performance. I was duped by you. You were taken aback by me.
With a gentle correction, Travis opened the ring box. Since you Tay, you deserve to have moments and to be astonished. They are not predicted, controlled, or performed. They are simply genuine. Now Taylor was crying out loud. She stared at the ring with trembling palms and streaming mascara.
Travis remarked, “Taylor Swift, his own voice growing emotional. I love you more than I ever imagined being able to love someone. Every day you make me chuckle. You inspire me to improve. You give me hope for eternity. Are you going to wed me? Unable to speak, Taylor nodded as Travis put the ring on her finger.
She wrapped her arms around him and gave him a tearful kiss. When they eventually parted ways, she said, “I can’t believe you did this. I believed I had two more days to get ready. I assumed I would be able to predict its exact arrival. Additionally, this was far superior.” Laughing, Taylor wiped her eyes. I look awful. Oh my god, I’m wearing jeans.
My makeup is all over the place and I’m crying. You look perfect, Travis remarked. They sat on the bench for a while, Taylor’s head resting on Travis’s shoulder. And honestly, you look real. That’s all I wanted of them gazing at her ring, which was illuminated by the string lights overhead. After a while, Taylor asked, “Can I ask you something? Anything? Were you upset when you found out I knew?” Travis considered the question.
At first, yes, I had put a lot of effort into the surprise, but I came to the realization that it wasn’t really for you. Rather, it was for me. I wanted to witness that moment of surprise and unplanned happiness on your face. But proposals aren’t really about that. Instead, they’re about asking someone to start a life with you.
The answer is what counts, not the question. You were going to say yes, whether you knew it was coming or not. Taylor gave him a gentle kiss. For the record, I would have said yes on Saturday as well, even if I had to pretend to be surprised. I know, but I didn’t want our engagement to begin with a performance.
Instead, I wanted it to begin with the truth. So, you performed differently, Taylor teased. You performed not proposing when I expected you to, so you could propose when I wasn’t expecting it. Travis laughed. When you put it that way, it sounds ridiculous. It was perfect. Taylor firmly stated. ridiculous and perfect, just like us.
Later, when they got back to Travis’s house, they found Jason, Donna, Patrick, Brittney, and Kylie waiting with champagne. “Yes,” she replied. “I’m so sorry about the text. I ruined your surprise.” “Actually,” Taylor said, flashing her ring. “You made it better. We now have a funny story about how Travis had to outsurprise the surprise.
Theycelebrated into the night, toasting the newly engaged couple and laughing about the mishap that had led to the change in plans. Before everyone left, Donna pulled Travis aside and said, “I’m proud of you for what? For choosing authenticity over perfection. That’s what good marriages are all about. I would have spent two more days worrying about wearing the right thing and having the right reaction are based on genuine moments, not flawless ones.
” Two weeks later, Taylor shared a picture of herself and Travis from the proposal taken by the photographer Travis had hired on Instagram. Taylor was laughing at something Jason was saying, her engagement ring catching the light every time she gestured. And Travis was positive he had made the right decision. Taylor was wearing jeans and a sweater, tears streaming down her cheeks, and Travis was grinning at her with.
he asked. “Yes, and yes, I’m wearing jeans because life’s best moments are the ones you don’t see coming, even when you think you do.” The caption read, “Absolute adoration. I am especially appreciative of Brittany Lynn for the unintentional warning that resulted in the most amazing surprise of my life.” Travis didn’t care that the post went viral on Instagram.
What mattered was the text Taylor sent him immediately after it was posted. “Thank you for making it real. I love you too, Travis responded, jeans and all. If this story moved you, please hit the like button and subscribe for more genuine tales about love, surprises, and the beauty of imperfect moments. Please share your thoughts about proposals in the comment section below.
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